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vector girl progress2 by ~zeibeku:iconzeibeku:

Categories Digital Art > Vector > People

©2004-2008 ~zeibeku
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Submitted: April 26, 2004
Image Size: 227 KB
Resolution: 666×548
Comments: 24
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ok my progress so far... the lips are still very crap.
worked on the eyes and some shadows... ive been VERY lazy and yeh.

if you want to compare from the first one i submitted check it here:
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constructive comments are appreciated ALOT :)
-what needs improvemnt etc...

thanks guys :)
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~Campbell-01:iconCampbell-01: Apr 26, 2004, 6:59:23 AM
veri fking awsome
hrrrmmmm constructive comments, lol i dunno what advice to give, i wouldnt feel right lol i dunno wea to start how can i give u tips.
ok i'll try, umm... mby the top right clump of hair is a tiny tiny bit 2 big, and also another hair swaying to the right on her forhead might look pretty nifty lol.
sorri, im onli saying that cause thea is nothing realli wrong but i wanna give a tip, i'll wait 2 fav this when its complete, good luck! :D

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~griz-:icongriz-: Apr 26, 2004, 8:03:44 AM
that really nice, i especially like the hair. keep up the good work!
~emptysubway:iconemptysubway: Apr 26, 2004, 8:10:19 AM
I love the hair and eyes....I think the lips look fine, for the angle it works. Great vectoring.
~Meggierocksmysox:iconMeggierocksmysox: Apr 26, 2004, 8:58:33 AM
awesome! I'd say work a bit more on the nose though but I really like it

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~l33t-gr33k:iconl33t-gr33k: Apr 26, 2004, 1:54:48 PM
the bottom lip looks good with that shine on it. top one needs work. eyes and hair are awesome
~ernestoguevara:iconernestoguevara: Apr 26, 2004, 3:08:28 PM
eyes look sick, more detail than id ever put :p

u gotta work on the nose though :p

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~zeibeku:iconzeibeku: Apr 26, 2004, 3:10:28 PM
thanks man, yeh the nise is shite still :hmm:

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abalone anyone?
~zeibeku:iconzeibeku: Apr 26, 2004, 3:25:01 PM
thanks man :)

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abalone anyone?
~zeibeku:iconzeibeku: Apr 26, 2004, 3:27:54 PM
thanks :) i need some feed back on that nose :nod:
it looks too sharp edged :hmm:

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abalone anyone?
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